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at vox pops

Structure (intro/outro/links)

Feedback - Improvements
- cut out ares with  no sound
interesting the whole way through mainly the facts. Good structure 


Soundbites and music

Feedback -  improvements - increase sound                                                                                               of the soundbites
the soundbite was very well done         


Levels/ background noise / hiss /
  improvements - improve vox pops
 levels and reduce hiss

 feedback -       

n/a   

pace / overall edit

improvements - add music and improve editing

feedback -
pace is good


energy / enthusiasm

improvements -

n/a


feedback -

lots of energy sounds like i am enjoying it

clear voce / answers

feedback -

good clear voice

improvement
n/a


ACTION PLAN

.edit music in
.make vox pops louder
.edit the bit where someone says she is atchually not that bad
.reduce hiss
.add an outro
.make audio fade in and out .